Jack is to blame for this, I just read perfection and was inspired...so yeah all your fault, Jack, not that I mind though...
CL
Skin Deep
the dips in your skin
are smooth freckled little-valleys.
perfection
in
imperfect wanderings.
the elfin up-tip of your nose
is no connotation of silver spoons
but of knowledge and uprighting existence.
when I hold you
perfection is in little things
it's all one can ask for
in this myopic sphere.
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i liked it...it was very descriptive.
I felt immediately like I knew what you were talking about.
"in this myopic sphere."
That's a great way of capturing both the visual and emotional impact of being so close to someone.
Good work.
I corrected the mistake, erggg I wish I could type and spell at the same time. oh well.
Hehehe (on two poems inspired), now dontcha feel special hon?!
CL
Sorry
Now I have two poems as replies to two of mine. How great ...
Anyway, I liked the graphical representation of the "valleys" in the first stanza, that was cool. Correction in second stanza, should be "spoons" I reckon. I liked it!